And Then There Were None Metacognitive Blog

In my first draft, I had some errors in word choice, I fixed them in my revisions. I also had an area in my part II where the flow of the paragraphs was off. I was told that it was a very abrupt and confusing subject change. The forms of support that helped me the most were the peer review and having an adult read it. This was specific to my current paper instead of towards past work. It was also more interactive. I think all of the forms of support should still be used, as they were all very helpful. I know that I have room to improve my flow of writing because my sentences are a little choppy sometimes.